Round 1 - Horizontal Tsuke, "Bitter", Fic (○)
Pseudonym: Horizontal Tsuke
Title: Bitter
Characters/Pairings: AkiHika
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Contains: smoking, oral sex
Summary/Notes: Touya has an unusual way to tell if Shindou is lying.
Body spray, check. Mints, check. Antibacterial hand sanitizer, check.
Shindou sniffed himself, and, determining he would pass muster, he took a deep breath and turned the key in the lock of the apartment he shared with Touya.
As had become some sort of routine whenever he went out with Kaga, Touya was on him before he’d managed to close the door. His back pressed against it, and he barely had time to register the audible click before Touya’s tongue was down his throat.
“Did you have a good time with Kaga?” Touya asked, tracing Shindou’s jaw with his tongue, trailing down his neck to mark him lightly before dipping into the hollow of his throat.
“Mmm,” was the best Shindou could do, his fingers digging into Touya’s bony shoulders, his thumbs rubbing at his collarbones.
“I’ll take that as a yes,” Touya mused, pushing Shindou’s shirt up just enough to nip at his belly button. “What did you do?”
“Ah- ah- we- oh god.” Shindou pressed himself against Touya’s face, Touya’s fingers toying with his zipper.
“I certainly hope not,” Touya replied, smirking against Shindou’s skin, dark, glittering eyes briefly locking onto Shindou’s. “What did you really do? Now I’m curious,” Touya said, painstakingly pulling Shindou’s zipper down one click at a time.
“Touya…” Shindou moaned, drawing out the last syllable of his name.
“Tell me,” Touya commanded, freeing Shindou’s cock, his hand hovering but refusing to touch.
“Dinner,” Shindou said, biting his lip. “Some new place, uh-“
Touya ran his fingers lightly down Shindou’s shaft. “Oh? Where?”
“I can’t remember!” Shindou practically growled. “There were little blue lights or something, and then we played Go. Damn it, Touya, if you don’t do something soon, I’m gonna-“ What he was going to do was lost in a muffled cry as Touya simultaneously pinned his hands to the door and took his cock into his mouth, pressing forward with practiced ease until his nose brushed against his abdomen.
Shindou’s fingers entwined with Touya’s as he moaned, back arched, pressing himself into Touya’s willing mouth. He tried to free one of his hands to push down his pants, but Touya held it firmly where it was. “I want, ah, touch me? Touch me there?”
Touya pulled his head back just far enough to speak, Shindou’s cock bouncing against his lips with each syllable. “Did you smoke?”
“What?” Shindou said incredulously.
“Did. You. Smoke?” Touya asked, emphasizing each word with a brief pause.
Shindou groaned. “No, so touch me already, will you?”
“We’ll see,” Touya said cryptically, taking the head of Shindou’s dick in his mouth and sucking lightly.
“What the hell is that supposed to me- oh god, yes.” Touya’s lips slid down his shaft, his tongue pressing against the underside of his cock, and all coherent thought fled.
He may have wonted more, but the warm heat was enough to have him panting, and within minutes of Touya’s expert tongue running over his skin, he could feel his balls tighten. “To- Touya, I’m gonna-“
“Mmm,” Touya hummed, the vibration going straight through to the heat pooling in his belly, and he yelled incoherencies as he emptied himself in Touya’s mouth, shooting spurts of cum down his throat.
Shindou slumped back against the door. “God damn, you’re good at that.”
Touya pulled his hands away, wiping drool and Hikaru’s seed from his lower lip, and said, “You smoked.”
“How the hell?” Shindou asked, tucking himself away in his pants and zipping them back up.
“You taste bitter, after.” Touya’s eyes narrowed as he stood, looking as perfectly pressed as he did when Shindou had arrived, not a hair out of place. “I left a blanket on the couch for you.” Then he turned and started towards the bedroom.
“Come on, Touya! It’s just a cigarette – I only smoke when I’m out with Kaga, it’s not that big of a deal.”
Touya stopped, turning his head to the side but not enough to look at Shindou. “I don’t like it when you smoke, but it’s your choice.”
“So what’s with the couch thing then?” Shindou asked, pushing away from the door and moving towards Touya.
“It’s not that you smoked. It’s that you lied to me.” There was hurt there, buried under his icy tone of voice, and Touya moved away when Shindou reached for him, retreating into the room, the click of the lock like a slap to the face.
Shindou stood there for a long time, staring at the barrier between them before lying down on the couch. He lay awake for hours with the knowledge that his terrible feelings were well deserved before slowly getting up and going to the door. He hesitated before finally knocking softly. “Touya?”
To his surprise, the door opened.
“I’m sorry.”
Touya pushed the door open further, stepping out of the way to allow Shindou to enter. “Just don’t do it again.”
“I won’t,” Shindou said, putting all of the fervor he felt into it as he reached for Touya, pulling him into a tight hug. “I won’t,” he repeated.
Touya nodded once, nudging him towards their shared bed as he shut the door once more.
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Title: Bitter
Characters/Pairings: AkiHika
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Contains: smoking, oral sex
Summary/Notes: Touya has an unusual way to tell if Shindou is lying.
Body spray, check. Mints, check. Antibacterial hand sanitizer, check.
Shindou sniffed himself, and, determining he would pass muster, he took a deep breath and turned the key in the lock of the apartment he shared with Touya.
As had become some sort of routine whenever he went out with Kaga, Touya was on him before he’d managed to close the door. His back pressed against it, and he barely had time to register the audible click before Touya’s tongue was down his throat.
“Did you have a good time with Kaga?” Touya asked, tracing Shindou’s jaw with his tongue, trailing down his neck to mark him lightly before dipping into the hollow of his throat.
“Mmm,” was the best Shindou could do, his fingers digging into Touya’s bony shoulders, his thumbs rubbing at his collarbones.
“I’ll take that as a yes,” Touya mused, pushing Shindou’s shirt up just enough to nip at his belly button. “What did you do?”
“Ah- ah- we- oh god.” Shindou pressed himself against Touya’s face, Touya’s fingers toying with his zipper.
“I certainly hope not,” Touya replied, smirking against Shindou’s skin, dark, glittering eyes briefly locking onto Shindou’s. “What did you really do? Now I’m curious,” Touya said, painstakingly pulling Shindou’s zipper down one click at a time.
“Touya…” Shindou moaned, drawing out the last syllable of his name.
“Tell me,” Touya commanded, freeing Shindou’s cock, his hand hovering but refusing to touch.
“Dinner,” Shindou said, biting his lip. “Some new place, uh-“
Touya ran his fingers lightly down Shindou’s shaft. “Oh? Where?”
“I can’t remember!” Shindou practically growled. “There were little blue lights or something, and then we played Go. Damn it, Touya, if you don’t do something soon, I’m gonna-“ What he was going to do was lost in a muffled cry as Touya simultaneously pinned his hands to the door and took his cock into his mouth, pressing forward with practiced ease until his nose brushed against his abdomen.
Shindou’s fingers entwined with Touya’s as he moaned, back arched, pressing himself into Touya’s willing mouth. He tried to free one of his hands to push down his pants, but Touya held it firmly where it was. “I want, ah, touch me? Touch me there?”
Touya pulled his head back just far enough to speak, Shindou’s cock bouncing against his lips with each syllable. “Did you smoke?”
“What?” Shindou said incredulously.
“Did. You. Smoke?” Touya asked, emphasizing each word with a brief pause.
Shindou groaned. “No, so touch me already, will you?”
“We’ll see,” Touya said cryptically, taking the head of Shindou’s dick in his mouth and sucking lightly.
“What the hell is that supposed to me- oh god, yes.” Touya’s lips slid down his shaft, his tongue pressing against the underside of his cock, and all coherent thought fled.
He may have wonted more, but the warm heat was enough to have him panting, and within minutes of Touya’s expert tongue running over his skin, he could feel his balls tighten. “To- Touya, I’m gonna-“
“Mmm,” Touya hummed, the vibration going straight through to the heat pooling in his belly, and he yelled incoherencies as he emptied himself in Touya’s mouth, shooting spurts of cum down his throat.
Shindou slumped back against the door. “God damn, you’re good at that.”
Touya pulled his hands away, wiping drool and Hikaru’s seed from his lower lip, and said, “You smoked.”
“How the hell?” Shindou asked, tucking himself away in his pants and zipping them back up.
“You taste bitter, after.” Touya’s eyes narrowed as he stood, looking as perfectly pressed as he did when Shindou had arrived, not a hair out of place. “I left a blanket on the couch for you.” Then he turned and started towards the bedroom.
“Come on, Touya! It’s just a cigarette – I only smoke when I’m out with Kaga, it’s not that big of a deal.”
Touya stopped, turning his head to the side but not enough to look at Shindou. “I don’t like it when you smoke, but it’s your choice.”
“So what’s with the couch thing then?” Shindou asked, pushing away from the door and moving towards Touya.
“It’s not that you smoked. It’s that you lied to me.” There was hurt there, buried under his icy tone of voice, and Touya moved away when Shindou reached for him, retreating into the room, the click of the lock like a slap to the face.
Shindou stood there for a long time, staring at the barrier between them before lying down on the couch. He lay awake for hours with the knowledge that his terrible feelings were well deserved before slowly getting up and going to the door. He hesitated before finally knocking softly. “Touya?”
To his surprise, the door opened.
“I’m sorry.”
Touya pushed the door open further, stepping out of the way to allow Shindou to enter. “Just don’t do it again.”
“I won’t,” Shindou said, putting all of the fervor he felt into it as he reached for Touya, pulling him into a tight hug. “I won’t,” he repeated.
Touya nodded once, nudging him towards their shared bed as he shut the door once more.
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