I'm glad you liked New Year's! That was the story for me and the original bunny; it wasn't until I was wondering why they were still pussyfooting around each other all discombobulated that I started going backwards and figuring out how they got to that point.

I agree about needing editing! I'm looking forward to taking some time to thoroughly go over it and tighten it up before I archive it anywhere, so hopefully I can tidy it up a bit and make it more presentable.

I agree that this is very long for such a simple story. I do admit that this was a very self-indulgent story to write; it is THE stereotypical HikaGo fanfic, written 500 times by 200 different fen, and I understand there was no need to add my voice to the choir. That said, it was incredibly fun for me to just roll around in feels the whole time <3 I'm happy I got to finish this and get it out of my system, and in the future when posting fic publicly I hope to focus more on telling stories that have not yet been told instead of rehashing the same thing over and over again.

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me your constructive thoughts! I really appreciate it!